Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
think that the main reason for studying a foreign language is to
travel
around the world or work overseas. Other
people
say that these are not the crucial causes why somebody has to learn a foreign language. In my opinion, it is not the only reason that
people
or children should be studied foreign
languages
. There
is
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myriad
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reasons
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why individuals need to study.
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most
people
learn
languages
these days.
Therefore
they are interested in learning new things and it arouses their interest.
In addition
, if they learn a new language, maybe it helps them to live in foreign countries in the future and they have a golden opportunity to explore different cultures, they have a chance to get information about traditions or about traditional holidays.
Besides
, the young generation has opportunities
such
as making new friends from abroad and it is a chance for them to boost their confidence, improve their speaking skills or it helps them to explore other
people
's ways of living.
On the other hand
, other
people
say that some citizens make themselves learn
languages
so that
travel
or work. As opposed to the above ideas nowadays most adults study new
languages
.
Thus
they want to land well-paid jobs easily. Some of them learn
languages
to
travel
around the world, just to learn something for fun. Taking everything into account, humans not only learn foreign
languages
for their work or
travel
,
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but
also
there are a lot of reasons that they should learn
languages
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
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