Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?
Owning a car for personal
use
has become a norm in Use synonyms
the
modern society mainly because of the convenience and flexibility it offers. Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, Linking Words
cars
symbolize Use synonyms
ones
wealth and prestige in many communities. Change to a genitive case
one's
With
all these reasons, Change preposition
For
Use synonyms
use
of personal automobiles increased over the Correct article usage
the use
last
three decades and Linking Words
as a result
, the problem of Linking Words
traffic
congestion Use synonyms
also
rapidly escalating. Governments, Linking Words
however
, can solve Linking Words
this
issue by providing alternative transportation options.
Linking Words
To begin
with, many Linking Words
people
buy Use synonyms
cars
for their personal Use synonyms
use
and with Use synonyms
this
, Linking Words
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
cars
entering cities Use synonyms
also
ever increasing. Individuals owning Linking Words
cars
rarely Use synonyms
use
public transport and share the vehicle with other passengers. Use synonyms
This
means that roads are filled with a number of Linking Words
cars
that exceeds the capacity of Use synonyms
those infrastructure
. Change the determiner
that infrastructure
those infrastructures
For example
, Linking Words
although
one person travel in a car, it Linking Words
addes
hugely to the daily Correct your spelling
added
adds
traffic
load. Use synonyms
Therefore
, it is evident that the more Linking Words
people
purchase Use synonyms
cars
, the more Use synonyms
it
will contribute to Correct pronoun usage
they
traffic
jams, Use synonyms
particulary
during peak hours.
As solutions, authorities should improve public transportation and promote the Correct your spelling
particularly
use
of alternative means of travelling Use synonyms
such
as cycling. Linking Words
Although
Linking Words
people
have private Use synonyms
cars
, if there are Use synonyms
cost effective
and comfortable public transport options, many will opt for Add a hyphen
cost-effective
such
alternatives, Linking Words
specially
for their routine travelling Replace the word
especially
such
as commuting to work. Obviously, there is some crowd who are health Linking Words
consious
and willing to Correct your spelling
conscious
use
cycling, given the fact that there are safer bike routes and rules in place. In Use synonyms
this
way, governments can Linking Words
pursuade
Correct your spelling
persuade
pursue
public
to limit car Correct article usage
the public
use
which leads to reduced Use synonyms
traffic
problems.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
people
prefer to travel in their own Use synonyms
cars
but Use synonyms
this
causes Linking Words
traffic
issues in cities. The governments should enhance and expand the public Use synonyms
trasnsportation
network Correct your spelling
transportation
while
encouraging individuals to Linking Words
use
other options Use synonyms
such
as using bicycles.Linking Words
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