In recent years, it has become conventional for companies to advertise their
, and some may argue that advertising is unnecessary since people will only buy
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they needed. In my view, it is partly true that people always buy
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goods, yet
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an important role in today society's.
To commence with, advertising is one of the key factors in boosting business profits. A prime reason is
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and advertising are always linked together. To
illustrate, companies can increase their
by promoting the features and functions of the
through advertising.
, some advertisements will attract and stimulate customers to buy the
, with interesting jingles and creative
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.
,
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industry has created numerous
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opportunities.
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millions of people around the world to get jobs
as poster designers, video editors, and digital marketing.
, it is undeniable that
sometimes is annoying and intrusive.
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advertisements that frequently
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everywhere else, especially when someone browsing the internet, could be an interference.
, not all
are real as
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to the original
. Manufacturers might include other elements
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the
, which
exaggerate the actual performances of the commodity.
, consumers might get
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the
and in the worsen case scenario, buyers might get confused and wrongly use the
.
In conclusion, I
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agree with the statement, and it is true that advertising
businesses increase their
revenue,
,
sometimes might abuse by manufacturers that
lead to bad results.