"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsiblefor bringing the children up

It is often argued these days that fatherhood should be prioritized just as much as motherhood. The opinion that a mother is responsible for deciding to have a baby makes her in charge of the baby’s life. I completely agree with the idea that fatherhood should be prioritized as much and think that raising a baby should be a shared task. First of all, a

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isn’t just to create a baby with a woman. When a kid is growing up he needs a

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to look up to and learn from. A mother's

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might be raising the child, but a kid needs an

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in his life

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growing up and that

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is usually his

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. Without an

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, a kid could grow up to be a bad person and even end up in jail.

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, it is a proven statistic that 70% of juveniles in state-operated institutions and 85% of youths in prisons come from fatherless homes.

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, children tend to be more confident and resilient when their dads are actively involved in their lives. It's because dads usually have a strong

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which makes the child want to be like his dad.

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, one of my cousins who grew up poor always had his dad around so even if he grew up poor he was able to grow up as a strong self-made man,

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one of my friends who grew up rich lost all the wealth that his dad left him because his

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was always away on business trips.

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, I think a

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is just as important as a mother's

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because fathers are usually the Child's

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and because children tend to grow up stronger with their dads around.