Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate frmo social life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Social
life
involves a variety of activities
, the
Correct word choice
and the
necessarity
of Correct your spelling
necessity
separate
working Replace the word
separating
life
from personal life
has been arguing
for a long time.
Some Wrong verb form
argued
people
believe that people
should still socialising
with their Change the verb form
socialise
be socialising
colleagues
even after the
work. Correct article usage
apply
People
usually have havey tasks during working hours, which will lead to a lack of chance to have deeper communication with other staffs
. Fix the agreement mistake
staff
Therefore
, it is a great opportunity to have futher
social Correct your spelling
further
activities
with colleagues
, such
as go
to Wrong verb form
going
gym
, hiking and Correct article usage
the gym
go
to Wrong verb form
going
restaurant
together after working hours. These Add an article
a restaurant
the restaurant
activities
will likely lead to a closer relationship between colleagues
, and by
doing these could result in a comfortable atmosphere that will help to boost the efficiency of work. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, people
usually will spend one third
of their Add a hyphen
one-third
life
on
working, Change preposition
apply
therefore
, colleagues
might be the person that people
spend the most of time
with. If the relationships with co-workers are not well developed, Correct pronoun usage
their time
people
would be quite suffer
during their working hours.
Change the verb form
quite suffer
On the other hand
, work are
not the only thing Change the verb form
is
people
have in their lives, families, hobbies, friends
are Correct word choice
and friends
also
inseprateable
parts of their social Correct your spelling
inseparable
life
. For example
, at weekend a phone call of colleague
is calling Add an article
a colleague
the colleague
in to
a person who Join the words
into
finally
have
their weekend available to go for a picnic with their children and parents at Change the verb form
has
park
If the person Correct article usage
a park
refuse
to go with Change the verb form
refuses
colleagues
for
Change preposition
to
social
event, the impression of his/her image as a co-worker might be negatively influenced, eventually cause a negative influence on their working environment.
In conclusion, if Correct article usage
a social
people
can have a positive relationship with their Fix the agreement mistake
co-workers
co-worker
, they can enjoy a lot of benefits. Fix the agreement mistake
co-workers
However
, I believe that people
are entitled to choose whether to join social activities
with their colleagues
during leisure
time or not.Correct pronoun usage
their leisure
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