Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate frmo social life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Social
life
involves a variety of
activities
,
the
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and the
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necessarity
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necessity
of
separate
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separating
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working
life
from personal
life
has been
arguing
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argued
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for a long time. Some
people
believe that
people
should still
socialising
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socialise
be socialising
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with their
colleagues
even after
the
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apply
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work.
People
usually have havey tasks during working hours, which will lead to a lack of chance to have deeper communication with other
staffs
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staff
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.
Therefore
, it is a great opportunity to have
futher
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further
social
activities
with
colleagues
,
such
as
go
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going
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to
gym
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the gym
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, hiking and
go
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going
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to
restaurant
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a restaurant
the restaurant
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together after working hours. These
activities
will likely lead to a closer relationship between
colleagues
, and
by
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apply
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doing these could result in a comfortable atmosphere that will help to boost the efficiency of work.
Moreover
,
people
usually will spend
one third
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of their
life
on
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working,
therefore
,
colleagues
might be the person that
people
spend the most of
time
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their time
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with. If the relationships with co-workers are not well developed,
people
would
be quite suffer
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quite suffer
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during their working hours.
On the other hand
, work
are
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is
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not the only thing
people
have in their lives, families, hobbies,
friends
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and friends
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are
also
inseprateable
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inseparable
parts of their social
life
.
For example
, at weekend a phone call of
colleague
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a colleague
the colleague
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is calling
in to
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into
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a person who
finally
have
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has
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their weekend available to go for a picnic with their children and parents at
park
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a park
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If the person
refuse
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refuses
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to go with
colleagues
for
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to
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social
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a social
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event, the impression of his/her image as a co-worker might be negatively influenced, eventually cause a negative influence on their working environment. In conclusion, if
people
can have a positive relationship with their
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co-workers
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co-worker
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co-workers
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, they can enjoy a lot of benefits.
However
, I believe that
people
are entitled to choose whether to join social
activities
with their
colleagues
during
leisure
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their leisure
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time or not.
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