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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that the tendency for local picnics would increase compared to foreign tours in near future.There are many reasons why I, personally, agree with
this
 view. On the one hand, the
expensiveness
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 of travel air tickets to foreign countries could not be
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 by many people.
Moreover
, the
acommodation
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accommodation
 and food
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also
 very costly in famous travel destinations
such
 as
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 Kingdom and Canada as their menus for foreigners are always priced higher than it for locals. Not only that but
also
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requires
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very good pre-planning for abroad trips as they include several critical processes
such
 as booking different destinations and preparing relevant documents for visa approvals.
On the other hand
, there are many benefits to both
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society and individuals when they remain within the country itself.
While
 local holidays would help someone to explore more beautiful
scenaries
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sceneries
scenarios
 in their own territory, it would
also
 be extremely beneficial to the growth of
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 tourism industry.
Further
,
this
 would enhance the historic and cultural knowledge of civilians. It
also
 helps people to get a better understanding
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 their own culture. In conclusion, travelling to different parts of one’s own country helps to contribute to your country’s tourism and lets individuals put lesser effort into planning, travelling and exploring.
Thus
, visiting one's own country on holidays and not abroad is a good decision.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestic tourism
  • international travel
  • cultural exchange
  • national pride
  • affordability
  • convenience
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • local businesses
  • comfort zone
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