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Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #business #study #course #college #university
Individuals are split when it comes to acquiring
about
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business
. Some believe that the most effective method of learning
this
 topic for people is going to
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educational
education
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environments
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for instance
 colleges or
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universities
 and taking
relaated
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related
 courses. Others,
on the contrary
, assert that other
learnig
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learning
 methods like self-studying could be more efficient in
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 of
business
. There are valid arguments
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 both sides, which I will discuss
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 conclude by clearly stating my viewpoint. From my perspective taking college
classes
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business
 schools is the best. On the one hand, some people argue that there are
any
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other better ways rather than studying in universities for learning
business
for instance
 self-studying with online
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courses
sources
. Primarily, because of limited time or data in online
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 some
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lessons
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 of
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 would be
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.
Moreover
, all the students are not
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passionate
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 nstructions by themselves, so there could be lots of mistakes in acquiring process. From another
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, other
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individuals
claim that
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classes
 are very helpful.
Initially
, as
business related
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business-related
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 courses are
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field
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 of study in universities,
also
 they have all new trends in
business
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 better for learners to attend
in
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college
classes
 physically.
Secondly
, in these university
classes
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 students can learn more
due to
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classmates
 which
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 not crossed their mind. In conclusion, I tend to agree with the advocates of
business
classes
 in universities, since they have more
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benefits
. It should not be forgotten that these
classes
 are only compared to online
self-studing
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self-studying
 at home.
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