The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of markets that

where

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were

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opened and

colsed

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closed

during the period

2011

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between 2011

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and 2018 in a single country.

overall

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, it can be seen clearly that there was a huge drop in the

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of

the

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shops

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where released in 2015 in that country. In detail, the

number

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of

shops

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being launched in 2011 (above 8000) was higher the

the

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number

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of closed

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(above 6000).

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, both numbers decreased in 2012, to

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slightly less than 4000 for openings, after that, an increase happened

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2013, so the closure rate recorded a

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above 7000, to keep

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it higher than the opened

shops

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by around 2000. later on in 2014, these

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bcame

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became

almost the same in 2014, which was more than 6000, but

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there was a gradually declining in openings

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at 2015, but a

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decrease for closures reached

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less than 1000,

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, the openings process experienced a growth in 2016 at 5000, and

this

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number

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did not change that much in 2017 and 2018.

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hand

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shops

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was

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closed in 2015 was 4000 and

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remain the same in 2016,

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finally

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this

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decreased to become 3000 in 2018