The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
amount
of markets that Change the quantifier
number
where
opened and Correct your spelling
were
colsed
during the period Correct your spelling
closed
2011
and 2018 in a single country. Change preposition
between 2011
overall
, it can be seen clearly that there was a huge drop in the number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
shops
where released in 2015 in that country.
In detail, the number
of shops
being launched in 2011 (above 8000) was higher the the
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apply
number
of closed one
(above 6000). Correct pronoun usage
ones
furthermore
, both numbers decreased in 2012, to became
slightly less than 4000 for openings, after that, an increase happened Wrong verb form
become
at
2013, so the closure rate recorded a Change preposition
in
number
above 7000, to keep the
it higher than the opened Remove the article
apply
shops
by around 2000.
later on in 2014, these number
Change the determiner
numbers
bcame
almost the same in 2014, which was more than 6000, but Correct your spelling
became
then
there was a gradually declining in openings number
at 2015, but a dramatically
decrease for closures reached Change the adverb
dramatic
to
less than 1000, Change preposition
apply
however
, the openings process experienced a growth in 2016 at 5000, and this
number
did not change that much in 2017 and 2018. on the other
hand
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,hand
shops
was
closed in 2015 was 4000 and Change the verb form
were
this
remain the same in 2016, finally
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,finally
this
number
decreased to become 3000 in 2018Submitted by dinaruqti on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
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