Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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increasing number of

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preferring taking

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medicines

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their medical doctor. From my perspective, I regard

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trend as a negative development. Granted, some would argue that it is justifiable to embrace

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development. More specifically, people, especially those living under the poverty line, may find

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medicines

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as one of the

most saving

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treatments

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to deal with slight illnesses.

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, the use of naturopathy is popularized in treating

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or flu season in Vietnam

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its affordable costs compared to western

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been scientifically tested and proven, many of these

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may entail latent risk of side effects, allergy or even fatalities owing to anaphylactic shock.

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, the aforementioned financial burden can be relieved since there have been many Asian manufacturers, namely India or China, offering medical

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price

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, leaving

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ones with a subtle role in curing illnesses. Another reason for not welcoming the

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medical approach is the lack of equipment.

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,

patients

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hospitalized in a hospital or clinic appear to be in

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hands of not only skilled and seasoned physicians but

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advanced medical

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, if a patient had a stroke, modern

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like a defibrillator would be used to ensure the patient's life is saved during his or her golden hour.

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, there are no

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medical

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in a medical establishment run by

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medicine practitioners, which means that

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stand a lower chance of being saved when a traumatic injury happens.

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, the aforesaid lack of scientific and medical research renders

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methods unreliable, and

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covered by medical insurance plans. That means

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patients

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can end up with exorbitant medical bills or not being protected by insurance laws if they negatively interact with these

treatments

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.

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, considering the lack of scientific proof, medical

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and insurance coverage, I regard

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trend as a negative development.