Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Owing to

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awareness is created for entry products that may be beneficial to improving lives. In my

opinion

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I believe that the advantages of

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in terms of promoting things that work efficiently and effectively

is

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are

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stronger than any disadvantages

it

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may have.

Firstly

, advertisement creates awareness about a

product

you never imagined existed which may be the key solution to a problem at hand

furthermore

it may

also

promote products that serve as

a

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replacements

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for

older

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an older

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tedious

way

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ways

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of living.

For instance

, the invention of different electrical and

non electrical

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non-electrical

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kitchen gadgets

that

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has today aided efficient and effective meal preparation without

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one wouldn’t know of their existence

similarly

it has helped reduce drastically the stress that has to be undergone using outdated instruments. Another point to consider is the technical know-how of how these various products operate which is visually displayed in the

advertisements

in addition

it gives insight as to the various ways a

product

can operate . By

this

I mean watching an advert will shed more light as to how a

product

is used or functions , one would practically see how a machine is put together or a food recipe is alternatively prepared so as to get the perfect taste. In conclusion,

although

there are disadvantages

of

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advertisements

, the advantages of it

benefiting

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lives in terms of making things run efficiently and effectively

also

it

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serves as an educative medium bringing to light knowledge of how a new

product

functions

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supersedes any of its demerits.