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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students.

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Education
, nowadays, has a lot of different ways to be realized by new
technology
. It is not necessary to have all the undergraduates in one classroom
how
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 it was in the past. As
educational
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the educational
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 system
develop
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develops
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 and change,
such
 benefits of new
technology
 in the
process
 of students’
education
 as affordable and
flexibility
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 become top priorities.
However
, no live connection in the educational
process
 can be a downside. One evident benefit of new
technology
 in the
process
 of students’
education
 is that it would make
education
 more affordable. Consider it from the point of view of one form of new
technology
 in the
process
 of
students’
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student’s
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education
, or rather, online
education
. It is believed that
,
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 students need to have only a stable connection and a device by which students could connect to online-lesson. Another reason that new
technology
 in the
process
 of students’
education
be
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 advantageous is that it could be used at the proper time and from
comfortable
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a comfortable
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 place. On other hand, there is
obvious
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an obvious
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 disadvantage of new
technology
 in the
process
 of students’
education
.
Firstly
, it would reduce the number of live connections between
student
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students
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 and
teacher
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teachers
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,
as well as
 between students and classes.
Secondly
, it
сould
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could
 lead to health problems, because it has been reported that online
education
cause
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causes
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sedentary
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a sedentary
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 lifestyle. In conclusion,
while
 there are plus points to having new
technology
 in the
process
 of students’
education
, too much
to
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 be lost
as a result
.
Hybrid
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The hybrid
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 system of
education
 should be prioritised to ensure the transfer of knowledge for future generations.
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