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some people think that the governments should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children. what do you think would be advantages and disadvantages of this policy?

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governments try to establish some policies that young people want to have
children
. Some people believe that the government should help
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their
parents
 who have infants stay at home to take care of their
children
 financially.
This
 would be a controversial question. I would like to give the advantages and disadvantages of
this
policy
. One advantage of
this
policy
 is that
parents
 can spend more time with their infants
instead
 of working.
Parents
 want to raise their
children
 by themselves, but they need to work to raise their
children
 at the same time. In
this
 situation, it is hard to quit or leave their jobs after having babies.
However
, managing their jobs and taking care of their
children
 is extremely difficult.
Thus
, if the government help financially the
parents
, the financial problem would be less and
parents
 can focus on their
children
 more.
On the other hand
,
this
policy
 has disadvantages, either.
This
policy
 is targeted only at
parents
 who have very young
children
.
However
, there would be
parents
 who have elementary to high school students demanding help from the government. Governments should carefully consider the target range of
children
 and try to help all the
parents
 as much as possible.
Overall
, the
policy
 which helps
parents
 with young
children
 financially has both advantages and disadvantages.
This
policy
 would be helpful for some
parents
 and their
children
,
however
, there would be more
parents
 who require help as well.
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