All careers have their benefits and drawbacks .And being professional artist. discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent years,people are increasingly interested in artists and their works of art. Being a professional artist has a lot of advantages.Their works of art are kept in museums,they are gaining attention and recognition.At the same time,some original works of art are being bought for huge sums of money. Based on
this
, I was convinced that there are several advantages to being an artist.
In addition
to
this
,becoming an owner of
this
profession opens many doors for you and your career and creates a new life for you.I believe that organizing trips to foreign countries,meeting new people and improving my worldview through professional talent are one of the best advantages of
this
job
. But on the other ,hand
this
occupation has several disadvantages,as in other trades.If I can talk about the disadvantages of
this
trade ,they are not as important as I thought,and I do not think that they are enough to leave
this
profession.Being constantly engaged in
this
job
sometimes leads to boredom and
this
is a common condition in all occupations.But another disadvantage is that you can not earn money from
this
profession permanently,
that is
,it is not a well-paid
job
in my country.
For
this
reason,many people do not engage in
this
job
permanently and find another
job
in addition
to it. All things considered, I can say that
this
trade is one of the most difficult professions
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