The best way to help underachieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in school and their grades will improve. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that there should be compulsory

after school

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activities mainly for underachieving

class

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. It is believed that they will become more involved in school which will result in improving their grades.Nowadays, students are becoming less and less interactive on their own. With

this

communication,gap their personal growth is being affected. They are just linked to the basic schedule of attending classes and doing homework. Extra-curricular activities need to be integrated

further

into the schedule. With the introduction of new-age

exercise

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for example

robotics,

artificial

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intelligence. pupils will be more interested and

hence

developing

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them. The

after school

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activities will

also

help in social interaction.

Moreover

,

this

technique can

also

be a stress-buster for students.

In addition

,these

future proof

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subjects will

also

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place them in a good position and will make them stand out from the crowd.

This

is a way to develop young and innovative minds which contribute

in

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the future

on

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of

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the country.In conclusion,

this

is the best way for young pupils to innovate ideas

as well as

improve

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regular studies with ongoing concepts. It is the time for underachieving pupils to explore their interests and ace them. It is definitely a move for improvement.