Many students have to study subjects which they donot like. some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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information about the method required to produce
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sugar
from
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sugar
cane.
overall
,the process
made
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of seven stages which
it
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begins
from
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growing the plant to harvest it ,and
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ends
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drying and cooling. several machines are
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being
used
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during
the procedure.
firstly
, farming the plant
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12 to 18 months in order to
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harvesting
it either by man or bay
specialis
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specialise
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virtual
.
secondly
, crushing it by a device where it
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the
suger
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sugar
can into juice so that it can
be purify
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.
thirdly
, purifying it
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limestone
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a limestone
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filter as a final
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substance
substances
before
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it to syrup .
in addition
, the purifying juice
sent
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to
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the evaporator
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then
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is on which leads to
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evaporate
the material.
moreover
,
centrifuge
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a centrifuge
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is
beenig
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being
used to isolate the
suger
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sugar
crystals
particals
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particles
from
syrup
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the syrup
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.
finally
, the final process is to dry and cool it.
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