Some people claim that there are more disadvantages to having a car than its advantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
To sum
of
many people's opinion backwards Change preposition
up
outweight
Correct your spelling
outweigh
benefits
Correct article usage
the benefits
while
other Linking Words
one's
agrees Change the noun form
ones
one
of
owning a private car. Be considered by Change preposition
with
mostly
scientists having a car Correct your spelling
most
is
badly impacted Unnecessary verb
apply
on
our society.Because of Change preposition
apply
this
they damage air Linking Words
ingridients
and contribute Correct your spelling
ingredients
Change preposition
to noisy
noisy
pollution.Replace the word
noise
Linking Words
Likewise
they can create Add a comma
,Likewise
a
long distance traffic jams Correct article usage
apply
as well as
Linking Words
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
waste
Add an article
the waste
amount
of time.Correct article usage
a amount
Besides
one of the worried Linking Words
thing
about rising transport types caused kinda traffic accidents.What's Fix the agreement mistake
things
more
it may be requested some expenses dor details and Add a comma
,more
charging
for taxes. Despite Change the form of the verb
charges
of
Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
this
contrasts they already create Correct pronoun usage
these
specially
comfort for society.Change the word
special
For instance
you Linking Words
really
free to go anywhere you want and you can use it as a home. you Add a missing verb
are really
sholdn't
have to Correct your spelling
shouldn't
wait
public Add the preposition
forwait
transports
or a uber when Fix the agreement mistake
transport
weather
Correct article usage
the weather
as
not as you like.Add a missing verb
is as
Last
but not least you can travel Linking Words
surroundings
without any borders and limits of course if you have a licence and visa. To Change preposition
to surroundings
connclude
in my view, Correct your spelling
conclude
buy
a Wrong verb form
buying
motor-car
isn't a tragedy as Correct your spelling
motor car
mostly
thought but Replace the word
most
few
Correct article usage
a few
fossil providing
Add a hyphen
fossil-providing
vehicle
or one's demands Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
an
alternative energy is truly supported and Remove the article
apply
according to
purpose.Linking Words
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion