The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The two pie charts show the proportion of money spent on various household necessities in
Malaysia
and Japan
in 2010. The date is calibrated in percentage.
Overall
, the data indicate that in both cases food, housing and other goods and services were the main expenses while
both countries spent least
on health care.
It can be clearly seen from the chart, in Correct article usage
the least
Malaysia
the greatest proportion of expenditure (34%) was on housing, while
in Japan
housing accounted for just 21% of the total. Followed by in Japan
the greatest single expense was other goods and services at 29%, compared with 26% in Malaysia
.
Moreover
, food came at
second place in Change preposition
in
Japan
, at 24%, while
in Malaysia
the actual proportion was higher (27%). In Japan
, another major expense was transport, at 20%, but this
was much lower in Malaysia
(10%). Surprisingly, in both countries, the smallest percentage of expenditure was on health care.Submitted by prostoy.pacan4ek on
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