The chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010.

The chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010.
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The graph provides information about the percentages of
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consumption worldwide in 2010.
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detail on five kinds of renewable
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usage during the period is
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presented.
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,
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having been used globally in 2010, our reliance on renewable
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still needs to be increased compared to the considerable expenditure on fossil fuels. Considering its 39% contribution, petroleum was the largest segment of all
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used in 2010, followed by almost a quarter of natural gas during the same period. Having accounted for only 22%, coal was the least among all the unclean energies provided in the pie chart. In terms of green
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, in 2010, nuclear power made up 8% of the total
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consumed by the world. It is 1% higher than renewable
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. Biomass and hydropower were the top two of all renewable energies depicted in the figure, with 53% and 36% contributions, respectively.
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, geothermal, solar cells, and wind only supply below 10% of 7% renewable power throughout the year.
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