Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory kob or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Life

is

un expected

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, and undesirable conditions

are always occur

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. Indeed, most of them refer to employment or financial aspects,

such

as conflicts with the boss or being broke

at the end

of

month

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. Do

people

have to accept difficulties as the inevitable parts of

life

or they should change them?

This

is a debatable topic. There are quite a lot of benefits with regard to

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adaption as an essential way to confront

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barriers.

For example

,

people

who have aggressive employers could enhance their anger management

skill

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.

Besides

,

although

bringing bacon

to

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home is a vital task in

the

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life

, less money has

less

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responsibilities.

Hence

, with a different

view point

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,

people

would

to

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be flexible about failures and feel the joy of

life

so easily.

As a result

,

the

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conformity

instead

of struggling to evolve the bothering situations could lead to peace and

an

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ordinary

life

without

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enormous stress.

Whereas

in contrast

, there are serious components.

According to

their beliefs, certain purposes are needed

to

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communities in working or personal aspects.

For instance

, without ambitions connected

dreams

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to dreams

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, career accomplishments and welfare are not achieved. So,

people

should make an effort to conquer stumbling blocks and reach the goals they wish. As long as they accept troublesome things like decreased job satisfaction or insufficient money to meet their needs, they will not be able to act along

their

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personal

fulfillments

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fulfillment

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.

Thus

, society should be persuaded to keep on track with dreams

demanded

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being

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ambitious and

high

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passionate.

Therefore

, a higher state of mental status could be dominated among

people

.

To conclude

, the adaption advocates suppose that happiness depends on your viewpoint

not

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the

situations

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.

However

, the opponents believe

people

need

to

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continuous trials. I assume a balance between two

separated

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opinions will be more useful.