Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory kob or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Life
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, and undesirable conditions
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. Indeed, most of them refer to employment or financial aspects,
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as conflicts with the boss or being broke
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of
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. Do
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have to accept difficulties as the inevitable parts of
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or they should change them?
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adaption as an essential way to confront
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barriers.
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,
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who have aggressive employers could enhance their anger management
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bringing bacon
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home is a vital task in
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life
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, less money has
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responsibilities.
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, with a different
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,
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be flexible about failures and feel the joy of
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so easily.
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,
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conformity
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of struggling to evolve the bothering situations could lead to peace and
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ordinary
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without
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enormous stress.
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in contrast
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, there are serious components.
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their beliefs, certain purposes are needed
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communities in working or personal aspects.
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, without ambitions connected
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, career accomplishments and welfare are not achieved. So,
people
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should make an effort to conquer stumbling blocks and reach the goals they wish. As long as they accept troublesome things like decreased job satisfaction or insufficient money to meet their needs, they will not be able to act along
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personal
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.
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, society should be persuaded to keep on track with dreams
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being
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ambitious and
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passionate.
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, a higher state of mental status could be dominated among
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.
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, the adaption advocates suppose that happiness depends on your viewpoint
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the
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.
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, the opponents believe
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need
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continuous trials. I assume a balance between two
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opinions will be more useful.

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