It is believed by many that those read for pleasure develop better imagination and language skills than people who prefer to watch TV. Do you agree or disagree?

Someone
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
different views about
people
who would like to read
improve
Fix the infinitive
to improve
show examples
better
imagination
and
language
competence than
people
who prefer to watch
TV
. As far as practical experience and general theory are concerned,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
strongly hold that it is a more effective
way
to develop
people
’s
imagination
and
language
skills
by reading. First and foremost, reading books can provide
people
with more opportunities to imagine, generally, reading only provides
people
with a literal concept, the specific expression of
picture
Add an article
the picture
a picture
show examples
should be described through their own
imagination
,
on the contrary
, watching
TV
is a direct display of the specific picture,
then
people
lose the opportunity to imagine these.
For example
, when some
people
read Harry Potter, they could imagine the incredible magic by reading the wonderful sentences in the
book
, but when they watch
TV
, the images on the screen will solidify their thinking,
therefore
, reading is a better
way
to stimulate
imagination
Add an article
the imagination
show examples
.
People
can provide their
imagination
by constantly reading and generating new ideas.
Secondly
, reading is
also
a good approach to
practice
Wrong verb form
practising
show examples
people
’s
language
skills
, the
book
contains profound
language
culture since each
book
has undergone many revisions and refinements to ensure the accuracy of
language
.
These
Correct determiner usage
This
show examples
process has
been
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
proved that the display of
language
skills
is irreplaceable cause
TV
shows are
also
produced through scripts.
Not to mention
that, when
people
first begin to learn languages and characters, they are often given a
book
by their teacher and generally become more skilled by learning word by word.
This
means
people
could improve their
language
by
imitate
Change the verb form
imitating
show examples
the sentences of books they read.
Therefore
,
through
Change preposition
in
show examples
this
way
,
people
can practice their
language
skills
and get better. In a nutshell,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
agree that reading is a better
way
to develop
imagination
and
language
skills
, as far as my
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
show examples
quote from James Madison goes, as long as the reason of a man continues
fallible
Change preposition
to fallible
show examples
, different
opinion
Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
show examples
will
formed
Change the verb form
be formed
show examples
, some
people
may oppose me,
however
,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
believe that they will compromise after being exposed to my article.
Submitted by 806960230 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!