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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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It is often considered by a group of individuals that the children would select their own choices on daily routines like food, clothes and fun activities, it makes them think that they only fulfilling their own desires.
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, a few masses believe that youngsters have to take decisions only because it would affect them. My point of view, I firmly concur with the latter proposition of
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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