A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest a possible solution to this problem.

Dear Masood, Hope you and your family are doing great. I received your letter
last
week and I was glad that you always look up to me whenever you face any problem and I, with all my heart, totally understand your current issue.
To begin
with, I have experienced exactly a similar issue with hygiene at the office’s cafeteria. Sometimes, it was the food that was either contaminated or undercooked but I
also
found the serving cutlery and plates quite dirty. During the first week, I kept falling sick because of the poor quality of food
due to
which I could not attend the office during my starting days which impacted negatively on my probation tenure.
Therefore
, I would suggest you inform the management regarding
this
problem
instead
of keeping it to yourself so that they could take possible steps to overcome
this
extremely unethical practice which must be compromising employee's health. I believe you will agree with my suggestion as I did the same in that situation. All the best, Salma
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