Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The opinion of

museums

differs

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among

people in terms of functionality and content.

While

it is true that the primary usage of

museums

generally is

educational

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purposes, I personally believe that

museums

also

can be fun

places

.

Museums

usally

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usually

have been used to learn about history and art. In schools,

education

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system is based on reading and learning from books and writing

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the

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paper on exams. Year to year,

this

conversional

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conversational

method is varied with new approaches,

such

as

culture

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tours and museum visits organized by school administrations. Thanks to

museums

, school pupils can learn history from

museums

with

different

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type

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of visuals and images

providing

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by galleries as the alternative

of

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boring lecture notes and with two-dimensioned books.

On the other hand

,

while

museums

are tend

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to be informative

places

amoung

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among

people and especially

teenegers

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teenagers

, it does not mean that

museums

are have

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to be boring and serious

places

. After the beginning of

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the milennium

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milennium

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millennium

millennial

age, a new era has been started in art history, named “Modern Art”. Almost subjects of the half of galleries represented in

museums

are related to modern art. In

this

new trend,

museums

have

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started to be much more interactive,

performance based

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and out of cliché

places

.

Hence

, nowadays activities have shown variety in

museums

and it enables to

museums

more enjoyable and attractive spots. In conclusion, the functionality and content of

museums

are still educative,

whereas

the number of galleries

are

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increasing based on entertainment nowadays.

Thus

,

museums

can be used

both

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for both

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educational and entertainment purposes.