Some people believe that life in a big city is difficult while others say that it is more convenient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities?

Nowadays, talking
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how hard is to live in a metropole is becoming increasingly popular. In order to support the large demand of employers, these places always are crowded
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people.
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, there are both pros and cons to deciding to live there. In
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why
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in a big city can be difficult and some
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the challenges to expect. Let's begin by looking at the advantages regarding inhabit
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a central area. One of the main positive reason to choose these locations
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that everything
that is
demanded is offered by a near place. What I mean by
this
is that everywhere there are places
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selling
or offering services, like hospitals,
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, malls or schools, even if you need something during the night is possible to buy
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telephone.
Secondly
,
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life
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a big site permits
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easier
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inside it because, not only the public transportation is well prepared to cover all areas but
also
these ways to move normally are linked, which makes
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to change from bus to train,
for example
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, have a great scheme that improves
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mobility. Turning to the other side of the argument,
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polution
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is a delicate topic which makes harder
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life
in big cities. In order to supply the demand
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work,
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and
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commercials
, even if is a
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holiday
, the city is moving and making noise and smoke. People who are
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there try to reduce the outside sound and
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of
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but is impossible to clear 100%. Another issue is that, as a more demanded place, the cost to keep
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life
there is higher.
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, like parking a car, firefighter fees, hospital taxes and fines. All things considered, starting a
life
in a big city is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of the services accessibility, faster movement and so on, and the cons of
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polution
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pollution
. Personally, I believe that the
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benefits
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near
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our necessities outweigh any
nevatives
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negatives
negative
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  • Urbanization
  • Infrastructure
  • Quality of life
  • Metropolitan
  • Commuting
  • Cost of living
  • Healthcare facilities
  • Educational institutions
  • Cultural activities
  • Overcrowding
  • Pollution
  • Stress levels
  • Employment opportunities
  • Recreational
  • Sense of community
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