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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this . Write a letter to the manager . In your letter: •Explain why you take time off work •Give details of the amount of time you need •Suggest how your work covered while you are away

#company #time #work #manager #•explain #•give #amount #•suggest
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Munisa Khamrayeva. I am a worker in your company. Your company is so friendly to each worker and always understands their conditions.
This
 is the reason, I am writing to request you. Can you give me a holiday? Because my sister was ill
last
 week and she need go to hospital and
also
 she needs a caregiver person.
That is
 why I ask you for a time for a month . Because I must take care of my sister. I need to her . If I can not do
this
 thing for her .She will upset me . I would like to suggest that if you can give me a vacation, my friend will work in your company
instead
 of me . I hope you will consider the matter that my problem.
Also
 , you can easily understand me . I wonder if it would be possible for you to help me. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, ...... Khamrayeva Munisa.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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