Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Working with the organization is a dream for many peoples', and it can have
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of advantages for employees. Where,
while
working for
company
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many many
people
believe to work with same co-operation for rest of their life. Others believe that changing a
job
after
certain
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can be beneficial for them.
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,
further
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perspectives and will lead to a logical conclusion. Nowadays, getting a
job
is one
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biggest achievement for many
people
. And once with they are connected with
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organization they don't want to lose it or change it at any cost for several reasons. Many of them reckon, staying with
same
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company
will give them myriad perks.
Such
as, the employer
company
will consider them whenever there is
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for
promotions
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company
will see
there
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loyalty and dedication.
Moreover
, these
people
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, you get familiar with the environment of
job
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or the
company
, you can get more productive and can increase to work since you don't have to worry about
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another new thing
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.
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, if
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the organisation there is a new employee, have to fo from go from many things like
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culture
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the culture
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of that place, getting regular with the new desk or computer and so on which many of them find challenging.
However
,
on the other hand
,
people
prefer to change jobs constantly because they illustrate
this
as a better opportunity in various ways. They believe
this
can give them a good understanding of different
culture
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cultures
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and
also
a chance to increase their salary continuously as no one will work for
same
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amount of money
another
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in another
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company
.
Furthermore
,
this
side of individuals add, by doing
this
can improve their knowledge
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example, understanding
a
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new techniques of working on
computer
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the computer
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. In conclusion, for many
people
changing a
job
can be hectic and can to
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go through many things that they
seeas
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see as
seems
a bit difficult. But I believe changing an organisation
time
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to time can
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chance to open new things that will be beneficial for a person.
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  • Corporate ladder
  • Adaptability
  • Comfort zone
  • Professional network
  • Diverse skill set
  • Industry exposure
  • Innovation
  • Resilience
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  • Job market
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