Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

Society is more and more modernized to
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the quality of
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lifes
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lives
life
.
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of the most crucial inventions nowadays is
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technology which helps us
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with others.
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, I
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both agree and disagree with the idea that it is having some bad effects on social relationships.
One
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the
one
hand, I believe that using these technologies can help us
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more friends or more people who give us important lessons. If you use some social applications
such
as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc, you may meet many people who want to find someone to chat, to
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their stories
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You
also
can meet your best friend or even your lover on it. Thanks to these relationships, you will become more confident and friendly.
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the other hand, it is
also
caused many problems.
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, there are some people
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on these relationships to buy
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drugs.
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, many students
espciall
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especially
the secondary ones use drugs because their “best friend” told them.
Secondly
, conflicts are begun from it. If you made friends with some bad ones, you would easily
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be joined into their conflicts
although
you did not want to.
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, many women and men are in love with somebody on
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, there are around 40% that they
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • face-to-face interactions
  • messaging apps
  • social media
  • non-verbal cues
  • family bonds
  • dependency
  • digital communication
  • superficial relationships
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • social isolation
  • virtual connections
  • emotional satisfaction
  • real-life interactions
  • technological intrusion
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