Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

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the quality of

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of the most crucial inventions nowadays is

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technology which helps us

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with others.

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both agree and disagree with the idea that it is having some bad effects on social relationships.

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hand, I believe that using these technologies can help us

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more friends or more people who give us important lessons. If you use some social applications

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as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, etc, you may meet many people who want to find someone to chat, to

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their stories

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can meet your best friend or even your lover on it. Thanks to these relationships, you will become more confident and friendly.

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the other hand, it is

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caused many problems.

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, there are some people

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on these relationships to buy

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drugs.

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, many students

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, conflicts are begun from it. If you made friends with some bad ones, you would easily

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be joined into their conflicts

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you did not want to.

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, many women and men are in love with somebody on

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, there are around 40% that they

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

face-to-face interactions
messaging apps
social media
non-verbal cues
family bonds
dependency
digital communication
superficial relationships
cyberbullying
online harassment
social isolation
virtual connections
emotional satisfaction
real-life interactions
technological intrusion

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