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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.  Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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With the globalization of the world, many countries are competing with each other on a higher scale. The government mainly focus on prioritizing economical progression to build a nation.
However
, some disagree as they believe that it is crucial for governments to pay great
attention
 towards other ways of progressive approaches. I strongly agree with the latter and in
this
 essay, I will discuss both of these views.
Firstly
, when the
economy
 of a
country
 is stable, there will be an influx of opportunities for the growth and development of a nation. Most of the top officials in the hierarchy work towards increasing the annual capital so a large fraction of their budget is allocated towards activities that will boost the
economy
 thereby increasing their revenue.
For instance
, the officials can encourage the community to start and develop businesses by providing funds, ideas, and exposure to international ties. If those businesses succeed, they will grab the
attention
 of the world and will
also
 generate income for the
country
 and
thus
, improve the national
economy
.
On the other hand
, the
economy
 is backed up by various sectors. But, how should
this
 be achieved? When the authorities invest in health and education, there will be a large percentage of healthy and educated minds who will positively impact the
economy
.
This
 is exemplified by the significant boost in the
economy
 of Denmark in 2020 as the authorities paid
attention
 to the health, industrial, and
also
 educational sector. So, reforming the community will later support the
economy
 in the long term. In conclusion, an attentive approach to levelling up the
economy
 of a
country
 depends on the
attention
 given by the government to build secondary sectors
along with
 the
economy
.
Therefore
, the government should not neglect other sectors when improving their
country
's
economy
.
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  • technological innovation
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  • healthcare system
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