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Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

#doctors #people #exercise #patients
As a general trend, it is recommended by some
people
 that a majority of practitioners preferred that
golden-ager
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 must generate
schedule
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a schedule
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 of physical exercises regularly, but research depicts that most
of
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have
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 prohibited
routine
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,
number
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 of causes and certain measures can be taken to encourage
this
 generation. On the one hand, many elderly
people
 procrastinate exercise and mood disorders play a prominent role
daily
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 exercise routine. To be more specific, the example can be seen in
lack
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 of coordination and balance, which is the most arduous impact on their daily health. These hazardous shifts predominantly encounter
from
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the
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sedentary activities and
lack
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 of coordination with social lifestyles.
For instance
,
majority
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 of
people
 avoid
to join
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 gym withdrawals, which leads them
into
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the
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health disorders especially anxiety and various mood depression and stress.
Lastly
,
physical
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 fitness
market place
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marketplace
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 and youngsters have failed to include and influence elderly
people
. In my view, as for encouragement, one’s can be reminded by their children or even
media
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 and advertising industry daily. Another remedy is that
media
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the media
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 can produce a specific program just for
this
 section of society. A good illustration of
this
 is special workout channels on Television to obviate the needs of
elderly
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the elderly
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.
Lastly
, take a group activity in a park as
salient
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 example; Instructors can hold classes in fresh air for the older generation which
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not only inspire them but
also
 ameliorate their health level.
To sum up
,
seniors
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 encouragement seems to have a burden on
younger
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the younger
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generations
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 shoulders. In spite of all contributing factors, proper plans can reduce the severity of
this
 issue considerably.
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