Many doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly, but most patients do not follow an exercise routine. Why do you think this happens? How can people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

As a general trend, it is recommended by some
people
that a majority of practitioners preferred that
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must generate
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of physical exercises regularly, but research depicts that most
of
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prohibited
routine
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,
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of causes and certain measures can be taken to encourage
this
generation. On the one hand, many elderly
people
procrastinate exercise and mood disorders play a prominent role
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exercise routine. To be more specific, the example can be seen in
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of coordination and balance, which is the most arduous impact on their daily health. These hazardous shifts predominantly encounter
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sedentary activities and
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of coordination with social lifestyles.
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,
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of
people
avoid
to join
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gym withdrawals, which leads them
into
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the
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health disorders especially anxiety and various mood depression and stress.
Lastly
,
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fitness
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and youngsters have failed to include and influence elderly
people
. In my view, as for encouragement, one’s can be reminded by their children or even
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and advertising industry daily. Another remedy is that
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can produce a specific program just for
this
section of society. A good illustration of
this
is special workout channels on Television to obviate the needs of
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.
Lastly
, take a group activity in a park as
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example; Instructors can hold classes in fresh air for the older generation which
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not only inspire them but
also
ameliorate their health level.
To sum up
,
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encouragement seems to have a burden on
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generations
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shoulders. In spite of all contributing factors, proper plans can reduce the severity of
this
issue considerably.
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