In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

Unlikely some of the countries people are trying to take the

business

to the large size of shop from out-of-town.

Therefore

people are interested to go by car;

while

this

use of cars

day

by

day

increasing.

Although

the benefits of

this

trend are varied, in my ,opinion the inconvenience is much more significant. On the one hand, now our population are increasing to the outer

side

of the metro

city

; the reason behind

this

fact is, Frist of all cost of the

business

can be affordable to all.

Like customers

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can take any kind of product very chipper and more affordable.

Secondly

,

this

can boost the economical condition increase to

this

area like the metro

city

; the density of the population

are

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mitigated in the large area. For that reason the out-of-small town is developing and modernizing

; ,

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;

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Moreover

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this

city

's government want to try to relocate all kind of facilities for others.

On the other hand

, If

increasing

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the shopping to

outside

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side

then

most of the time people want to try using a car; It is impacted the environment and reduces natural fuel like gas and diesel; Mostly our ecosystem is going to threaten. If increasing the use of cars is

then

carbon emissions will increase as well .

Additionally

, our natural resources are

day

by

day

decreasing

due to

the huge use of vehicles. We are affected in both ways; rising carbon footprint and our greenhouse effects impacted by the global ecosystem. In conclusion, developing our

city

side

to getting the cheaper price of materials and new

business

development for customers and

business

owners. I totally disagree, using the car to the outer

side

of town to decrease the environmental condition.