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In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?

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Unlikely some of the countries people are trying to take the
business
 to the large size of shop from out-of-town.
Therefore
 people are interested to go by car;
while
this
 use of cars
day
 by
day
 increasing.
Although
 the benefits of
this
 trend are varied, in my ,opinion the inconvenience is much more significant. On the one hand, now our population are increasing to the outer
side
 of the metro
city
; the reason behind
this
 fact is, Frist of all cost of the
business
 can be affordable to all.
Like customers
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 can take any kind of product very chipper and more affordable.
Secondly
,
this
 can boost the economical condition increase to
this
 area like the metro
city
; the density of the population
are
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is
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 mitigated in the large area. For that reason the out-of-small town is developing and modernizing
; ,
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;
,
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Moreover
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,Moreover
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this
city
's government want to try to relocate all kind of facilities for others.
On the other hand
, If
increasing
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increase
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 the shopping to
outside
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the outside
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side
then
 most of the time people want to try using a car; It is impacted the environment and reduces natural fuel like gas and diesel; Mostly our ecosystem is going to threaten. If increasing the use of cars is
then
 carbon emissions will increase as well .
Additionally
, our natural resources are
day
 by
day
 decreasing
due to
 the huge use of vehicles. We are affected in both ways; rising carbon footprint and our greenhouse effects impacted by the global ecosystem. In conclusion, developing our
city
side
 to getting the cheaper price of materials and new
business
 development for customers and
business
 owners. I totally disagree, using the car to the outer
side
 of town to decrease the environmental condition.
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