The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to

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an issue with the rubbish collection system in my community. The main problem is that

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of the rubbish chute, installed on the 11th floor is not closed tightly for a couple of weeks. The chute’s cover didn’t close fitly after throwing rubbish

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the tube and

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there is a gap between the cover and the chute.

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reason

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I contacted the west coast town council

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week and launched a complaint related to

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case.

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, no action was taken by the authority up to

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point.

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, I am writing an official letter and requesting to fix the matter soonest.

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reason, my neighbours and including myself are suffering from the unpleasant smell of the trashes.

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, we started to see the existence of ants and cockroaches

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outside of our units which we did not encounter before. Appreciate it if you could arrange for a service team down to our blocks and replace the cover as soon as possible.

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, I would like to suggest that the town council should form a team and schedule a regular inspection in order to avoid

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problems in the future. I do hope that

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issue will be resolved soon. Yours faithfully, Hninn Ei Ei Win

huizhu07Sun Jan 29 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

224 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rubbish collection system
not working properly
bins
designated collection days
overflowing with rubbish
collection trucks
efficiency
reliability
problems
unpleasant odours
attracting pests
flies
rats
unwanted pests
accumulation of rubbish
unsightly
unhygienic environment
uncollected waste
inconvenience
storing garbage
health hazards
immediate attention
local council
prompt action
properly maintained
staffed adequately
waste management system
regular inspections
functioning effectively
establish a complaint mechanism
waste segregation
proper waste disposal
public awareness campaigns
waste management experts
sustainable solutions

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