It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, the Extinction of animal
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is increasingly found all over different parts of the world. Some claim that extinction is a natural process associated with rare
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others
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as environmentalists stress the importance
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the preservation of endangered
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essay, I will explore reasons why the statement is misleading and contrary to the view majority of us, uphold.  As human population and urbanization grew exponentially over the
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two decades, it has resulted in frequent deforestation activities that destructed the inhabitants of various rare
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, it has caused many of them to have no means of survival and eventually die out sooner. It is utterly catastrophic to state that dinosaurs, dodos and white rhinos are formally declared extinct and now that all we have is a picture in google to show our future generations. 
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, polar bears are now becoming an endangered
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of global warming which melts ice-caps and glaciers in the North Atlantic, which has left these innocent victims to die of hunger, as it prevents hunting.
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is a grave humanitarian issue which requires immediate global attention and it is very pathetic that people still have no clue as to why
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keeps on happening. Until it affects them directly, they fail to act
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. In no longer in future, if all the bees and other pollinators get extinct, humans will have serious repercussions in the future. As the ecosystem is interconnected with pollinators
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and generates humans to have a proper food-supply chain. Without bees, it would be impossible to ensure the cultivation of crops for farmers and detest to have an effective reproduction system with trees and flowers.
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, it is not a natural process in which
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get extinct but is a result of human failure to appreciate the benefits conferred by these
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in our lives. And I strongly disagree with the statement as I believe it is a social responsibility normally expected by a common citizen. If we all do small approaches to preserving these
animals
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, it will benefit us in the long run.
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