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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In recent years, with the uprise of the tech-savvy generation, many use the
internet
 as a mediator of their
work
. Some states that the printed versions of newspapers or
books
 will be decaying as many opt for an online free version rather than buying hard copies. I completely disagree with the above-mentioned and in
this
 essay, I will elaborate on the reasons for the impossibility of complete digitalization in
books
 and newspapers.
Firstly
, there is limited access to free versions of online
books
 and newspapers. If every literature product was freely available to the community, the printing companies and the eminent authors will get bankrupt in some time. The premium features are only given access once a substantial fee is paid.
For instance
, authors, editors, and journalists take so many precautions to save their
work
such
 as lawsuits, and copyrights until it is ready to publish. So that if one were to wrongfully upload their original
work
 before the right time, they will be facing repercussions like billion-dollar lawsuits or jail time.
Secondly
, online resources are intangible and only
work
 with a good
internet
 connection. When the network is bad, reading materials online becomes a hassle,
whereas
 it is less challenging with
books
.
For example
, a number of rural areas have no electricity or access to the
internet
 so those communities will have no way to find online documents. So lack of good
internet
 connection and electricity will become a drawback for online editions. In conclusion, it is evident that it is impossible to have a complete shift in the way people choose to read
books
 and will not be completely digitalized.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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