Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizer and better machinery. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion.

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solutions , substantial people say that nourishment can be easily produced nowadays with the help of
technology
and chemical acids which plays a significant role
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growth. Here , I would like to discuss
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and disadvantages
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artificial intelligence
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benefits. As we know, agriculture has
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us .
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technology
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which reduced the time capacity and
also
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of people when they work
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farms .
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, in the production of foods fertilizers fulfil the nutrition, Because nature sometimes
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not support
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growth.
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, it
also
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smartwork
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smart work
. For , example , the university of Delhi exhibits that farmers
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more
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cropes
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crops
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advance
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production.
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more growth of
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crops
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a chemical fertilizers
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chemical fertilizers
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, which can
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adverse to
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health.
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very dangerous for
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society. For ,instance, in India average
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people are
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by cancer diseases .
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also
create
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a
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crucial pollutants , like air pollution, water pollution and many more.
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but not least, particular machinery which
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widely used in basic farming are quite expensive, so poor farmers cannot
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with
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this
convinence
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convenience
. In conclusion,
foods
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ands
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and
nutrition resources are now more available with the help of
technology
and chemical acids we can produce as we need .
However
, there are benefits of it and
also
negative aspects of it which I mention in the essay.
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