In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, the number of fast-

food

outlets has widely spread throughout the world and in several cases, citizens prefer to consume junk

food

to classic

cuisine

. I sit on the fence about

this

kind of issue, since there are numerous benefits,

although

some drawbacks still need to be considered. Having a bunch of foodstuff stores might simplify and save us time to eat. No doubt that preparing meal was become a complex activity, especially for office workers downtown. Fast

food

, which can be served without taking much effort to finish, could become one of the solutions.

Furthermore

, choosing it

instead

of traditional

food

will save time either for serving or consuming. Junk

food

such

as burgers or fried chicken is designed to be eaten easily,

hence

will helpfully save hours.

On the other hand

, over-consuming fast

cuisine

will lead to several unhealing diseases in long term,

such

as cancer or obesity. The lengthy process of making fried fries,

for example

, made them contain harmful content for people whom they consume. Additional chemicals which keep the substance more durable are

also

had its responsible for spreading potential sickness. Equally important, replacing traditional

cuisine

will bring the negligence of heritage. Especially for young people, who prefer eating burgers to home-made meals, if

this

cycle happened continually, it might affect traditional

food

’s existence in the future.

For instance

, several cities in Indonesia have lost their local

cuisine

due to

this

kind of issue. All in all, fast

food

is sure to give benefits to some extent,

such

as being practical to service and efficiency in time usage,

however

, too much reliance on it will emerge numerous drawbacks,

such

as health issues and culture loss.

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12Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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282 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Impact
Nutritious
Cultural heritage
Identity
Economic implications
Locally sourced
Social cohesion
Environmental degradation
Obesity
Heart diseases
Diabetes
Cultural transmission
Convenience
Traditional dishes
Biodiversity

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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