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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

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Language
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 is a method for communication, not only a bridge for
people
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’s connections but
also
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 a tool for relationship building. When we met a new person, we need to build a new relationship, except the eyes contact or a smile, we just need the
language
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 to communicate, and let him or her know what we mean and what we want to express.
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, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, writing) are equally important, because the four skills complete a full
conversation
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, if we lost one of them, the
conversation
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 is invalid.
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, if I just speak without listening, it’s a ‘one-way talk’ not a
conversation
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;
On the other hand
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, if I only used the skill of listening, I don’t talk to others,and I could not fully express my mean to foreign
people
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, it was not a full
conversation
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. Learning a foreign
language
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 is a difficult thing but worth to do it, even if it was hard and tiring. I had ever heard a story from ‘the Bible’, for long long time ago, we all speak the same
language
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, but one day, God wants to punish the
people
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due to
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people
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 were trying to build a high tower in the sky, so God separated the
language
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, let
people
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 could not communicating to each other.
This
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 is a Bible story about the
language
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. The interesting thing is there were at least 7102 languages in the world, but I only used Mandarin and English. In conclusion, the four skills of learning a
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 are same equally important to everyone who want to know a new
language
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, even learning another new
language
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 is hard and tough, but it is worth to do it.
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