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Some people do same type of work for long time, while others change the type of work frequently. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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communities
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reliable
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workers
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careers
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lives
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requirement
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reliable
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work placement
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achieve
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satisfactory
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requirement
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skillfull
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skilful
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persons
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people
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ability
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changing
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rather than
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position
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professional
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adaptable
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work force
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especially
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characteristic
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type
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emergency
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sectors
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performance
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work placement
work-placement
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contribution
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influence
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increase
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work
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efficiently
. in my point of view that great to have enough
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opportunity
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your experiences
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 with particular
work
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change
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careers
career
consistanlty
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consistently
 to have
wellqualifications
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well qualifications
 and
proficciance
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proficiency
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work
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,people who looking for
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workplacment
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workplace
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persons
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people
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 with
underprusser
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underpressure
 and
work force
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workforce
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giving
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gives
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 them huge
promotione
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promotion
promotions
 and high
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salaries
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keeping
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placement
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 without increasing their ability
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sufficiently
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