Experts believe that, over the next decade, robots will be doing many of the jobs currently done by humans. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Nowadays, artificial intelligence is starting to change many aspects of life in the world.One of these innovations is a robot and a lot of scientists made assumptions that many operations will be done by
robots
in the near future. In my view,
this
invaluable effect has certain negative and positive points simultaneously, which will be discussed in
this
essay. The main advantage, what can
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mention it is
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fact that
people
can get free from wasting time on useless and petty
work
. Or
conversely
, saving workers from too dangerous operations.
For instance
,
robots
can
work
instead
of employers who
work
in mountainous areas or toxic factories, where ordinary
people
are under the threat.
Moreover
, there are many establishments, where
work
must never stop and where
robots
can help a lot with their continuous
work
without interruption.
As a result
, production
work
will improve significantly. Despite positive facts, there are some disadvantages.
Firstly
, cases of unemployment will become greater. If menial labour is done by
robots
,
people
without education will lose their jobs and poverty will
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.
Subsequently
, the demographic situation around the world will be deplorable. As
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example,
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the majority
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of
people
in Kazakhstan do not have
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degree
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and have to
work
in workplaces as wage-earners. All things considered,
besides
many positive impacts
people
will be exposed
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negative facts.
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