The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. Summarise it.

The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. Summarise it.
The bar
chart
and pie
chart
illustrate reasons why Americans travelled and what problems they
have
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faced in the year 2009,
It is clear that
majority
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of US residents travelled mainly because of their work and
minority
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of
people
had
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travelled to visit friends and relatives.
However
, the main concern for travelling was the cost of trips in the same year. In terms of reasons for travel, commute to and from work was the highest figure in the bar
chart
, at 19%.
On the contrary
, only 6% of trips were made by US citizens to visit friends or relatives, which was the lowest figure.
Furthermore
, travelling for personal reasons, shopping, social and recreation accounted for 19%, 16%, and 10% respectively in 2009.
On the other hand
,
according to
the pie
chart
, the main issue
for
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travelling was the cost of it, which was considerably higher than other problems, at 36%.
Besides
, 19% of American
people
's concern was for safety which was slightly higher compared to the concern for aggressive driving.
Also
in the same year, 14%
people
of
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USA described traffic congestion as their
problems
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,
while
the proportion of
people
who thought that access to public transport and space for pedestrians were some major travel issues was,
at
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8% and 6% respectively.
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