Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is after say that

music

has been a common

language

which brings various and numerous notions together, and I am of the same opinion. To commence with, people of each country have different

language

speaking,

besides

every culture has their own way of communicate which is anonymous to others. Indeed, people of various cultures are unknown to each other

due to

variety

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of local

language

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languages

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and unique ways of life. Surprisingly,

music

is totally different

as a result

of common instructions and rules in every region, even in the middle of nowhere the rule of learning

music

and its alphabet is the same.

For example

, the one who

desire

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to play

piano

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the piano

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in Africa

have

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to learn and knowledge

the

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of the

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stimulate

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structure as the one in Asia.

Furthermore

, our emotional feelings could be understood better from the

music

more

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than

other

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in other

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ways.

Music

rhythms are able to

illustrated

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humans

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feelings

such

as happiness and sadness in one common way around the world.

As a consequence

, we know and learn the same rules for

communicate

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communication

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.

Therefore

, we can make

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a connection

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connection

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and share or inform our opinions or our emotions

thorough

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through

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this

common

language

to others wherever we are. It might be said that

music

is not the only way of communication. Second

language

, new technology

arrivel

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arrival

could

also

play

this

role as well, and definitely would be advanced in the near future;

However

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, the powerful role of

music

in providing and creating common values could not be deniable or even comparable as we can see many

musical

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music

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festivals and concerts which are held around the world regardless of gender, nationality or culture. In conclusion,

this

common belief that

music

brings folks all over the world together seems to be true and

this

impressive

language

has proven it well.