Some people say that success is '10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work' Is hard work the key to success, or is talent also important? Give reason for your answer and include any relavant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Success
has different ways to achieve. Someone claimed that capability has less effect than hard work
. hard work
can be a vital element in successful people
. I'm keen on saying clearly and also
declaring my main idea in this
statement.
from my point of ,view hard work
is the most efficient element to success
. Because with trying and practice you can achieve most things. But practising has some rules. Having a regular plan and being proportional with yourself maybe can be the first rule. The second rule is, to keep this
plan for a long time. For instance
, all inventors such
as Steve Jobs must try hard to a regular plan for a long time, to be well-known among the people
and also
people
and managers support them Success
has different ways to achieve. Someone claimed that capability has less effect than hard work
. hard work
can be a vital element in successful people
. I'm keen on saying clearly and also
declaring my main idea in this
statement.
Talent
isn't
unimportant. Some people
have an instinctive ability to do something and some people
if they try hard and train a lot, can not prosper in this
field. Because all people
have been created for specific activities and nobody can not be changed. For ,example international soccer players such
as Leonel Messi have special instinct talent
in addition
to hard work
and training a lot.
talent
and hard work
are not enough for success
. Sometimes luck
completes it. Some people
might not believe in luck
. But in my view luck
is important. Unfortunately, luck
isn't
related to you and can never be estimated. Like, my brother had interviews with an engineering company and can get the job. This
success
depends on his trying and hard work
and also
his individual talent
. But luck
isn't
affectless and helped him.
in conclusion, the result shows that hard work
can overcome talent
and luck
. Because both things don't
exist. And when you want to start a new activity you can count on hard work
and also
have good confidence to be successful.Submitted by mohammad.rahmanifx22 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
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- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite