Some people claim that there are more disadvantages to having a car than its advantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

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Using a
car
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has been becoming increasingly common in recent years.
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think that it maintains some exact harmful consequences. I strongly believe that the advantages can outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand,owning
cars
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have
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a significant influence on the environment.The first reason is that the growth in travelling by
car
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can lead to a rise in pollution, traffic jams and accidents.More
cars
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are likely to result in
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rate of pollution.
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, our dependence on
cars
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can lead to
decrease
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in practice
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as walking and cycling. People may have a higher chance of Carrying more potential health risks like obesity and heart attack.
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, there are many reasons why people prefer to own
cars
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.
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, it provides people with
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freedom of movement.the
easr
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ease
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of transportation, which a
car
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brings is
significant
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more significant
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than any other
forms
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of
vehicles
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vehicle
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.
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, you can go from
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destination to another destination and no time is wasted waiting for the bus or the train.
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,personal
cars
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can give comfort likened to
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public transport which
are
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so crowded and disgusting than every
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, you can read books or listen to your
favorite
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songs in your own
car
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.
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, all seems to be impossible on
a public transport
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public transport
a means of public transport
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. All In all, having a
car
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cab
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can
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lead to a few problems,
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, I suppose that owning a
car
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is the best choice and the benefits that it brings about can outshine the flaws
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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