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More and more students are studying at universities abroad. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad. Support your arguments with reasons and or examples from your own experience and observations.

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Studying abroad has become an
extrimely
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extremely
 popular option among University
students
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. There are significant reasons for studying overseas. In
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 essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both the benefits and the downsides. One of the most essential reasons for studying abroad is that there are a lot of scholarships that attract millions of
students
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 each year.
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, studying
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 foreign universities
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 adds value to their portfolio or resume and creates better opportunities to pursue their career. It can
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 be taken into account that having an international degree can ensure better job opportunities all over the world.
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, university fees for international
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 are very high. They should
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 pay for other expenses, like
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accommodation
, travel costs and food.
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 high living
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, many
students
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 end up working
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part-time
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 jobs so they can
fulfill
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 their needs.
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, I believe that every student deserves a quality education and
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 experience of
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,
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 studying abroad might test and challenge you mentally and emotionally, it will help your personal and
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professional
 development.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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