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Should young children be encouraged to follow strict rules based on their cultural traditions or allowed to behave freely? Discuss both views and give your opinion?

#children #rules #traditions
People
 have different opinions regarding raising
kids
. Some of them consider
that is
 more important to ensure that they keep traditional
values
 than to be able to express their own ideas.
Although
 both have pros and cons, I think
that is
 better to give the youngsters freedom to behave
according
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 their own ideas. Keeping traditional
values
 and cultural lifestyle is important to
people
 so they can
identfy
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identify
 with their roots and preserve some of
values
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 of their ancestors. Having some
things
 in common helps children to connect
between
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 each other, so they can create stronger
bond
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 inside
of
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their community or family. Despite these facts, blindly sticking to old folklore can be very limiting for
childrens
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children's
children
 life in modern society considering that there is a lot of
things
 and ways changed now and that
nowdays
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people
 have knowledge about more
things
 than in the past when those traditions started, but
also
 they are getting already prepared reactions on certain situations, so they will not be able to react properly in different
enviroment
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environment
environments
. One
of
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typical
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examples
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 of
community
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a community
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 with
strict
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the strict
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 traditional way of raising
kids
 are
Amishs
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Amish
. They have very strong bonds within their communities thanks to
same
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values
 that they respect, but
in
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 the same time they have very restricted
acess
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access
 to a lot of modern knowledge and technologies which leads to
limited
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to
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lack of some basics that
kids
 need, like good healthcare
for instance
.
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Encouraging
 children to have their own opinion and way to do
things
 has great benefits for their social
developement
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development
,
but
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also
 promotes their congenital skills. By
addopting
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adopting
 and creating their own
behaveoral
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behavioural
 patterns, youngsters learn how to act in certain situations and how to solve different problems.
Also
,
forsing
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forcing
 their brain to work harder, they will be able to better faster adopt learn and adopt new skills. In conclusion,
although
 keeping tradition is important for
people
, following strict rules can be very limiting for
kids
, so allowing them to create their own patterns of behaviour brings more benefits to them.
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