The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the manufacturing process of instant noodles.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the procedure consists of eight stages, starting with the storage silos and finishing with the labelling and sealing of cups.
It can be seen that in the first stage of Linking Words
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process, flour is pumped from a truck into the silos for storage. Linking Words
Then
, the flour is placed in a machine where it is mixed with water and oil. Linking Words
In addition
, the mixture is rolled over the dough sheets before being separated into strips by a machine. In the sixth phase of Linking Words
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process, they are cooked with oil Linking Words
then
these resulting strips are left to dry.
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during the fifth stage, these dough strips are shaped into discs of noodles. After that, the dried noodle discs are mixed with the vegetables and spices and placed into cups in the seventh step. Linking Words
Finally
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procedure ends with the cups being labelled and sealed.Linking Words
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