The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph gives information about how many people joined various major
sports
in some Use synonyms
area
for over 20 years Fix the agreement mistake
areas
started
from 1997. In general, almost all major Change the form of the verb
starting
sports
have Use synonyms
Correct article usage
an increase
increase
trend, except cricket. Replace the word
increased
Moreover
, gentle walking was the most Linking Words
favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
Use synonyms
sports
among others from 1997 to 2017.
There Fix the agreement mistake
sport
are
a difference in Change the verb form
is
number
of people who participate in major Change the article
a number
the number
sports
Use synonyms
on
1997 and 2017. In 1997, gentle walking have the highest Change preposition
in
participants
compared to other Correct quantifier usage
number of participants
sports
with 50,000 Use synonyms
participant
. Change to a plural noun
participants
This
number continues to increase and reach 55,000 Linking Words
participant
in 2017. Change to a plural noun
participants
On the other hand
, cricket Linking Words
have
to go through a significant decrease Change the verb form
has
during
20 years from more than 35,000 joiners to below 10,000 joiners.
Change preposition
over
Beside
gentle walking, there are basketball, football, and hiking Correct your spelling
Besides
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
gained popularity in Linking Words
Linking Words
this periods
of time. Other Change the determiner
this period
these periods
sports
like jogging and Use synonyms
aerobic
Replace the word
aerobics
has
not changed much from 1997 to 2017 with participant around 33,000 people.Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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