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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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 are being
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used
 more and more in upbringing some people say that
this
 is a
posltive
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positive
 trend,
while
 others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. One of the main causes is
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computer
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computer
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This
 essay will discuss the reasons for
this
 problem and provide some recommendations to reduce them. The advantage of the
computer
.
Firstly
,
Computer
 help students in Computers help students a lot in learning, working,
writing
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 documents and presentations. It
also
 plays an important role in companies today, most offices use computers to import data and statistics tables.
Secondly
, Computers can be
together with
 a wireless network that can be linked together
any
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 time, which is helpful to manage devices and enter metrics. The advantage of the
computer
 is a lot but there are some people
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 that the
computer
 brings the negative.
Firstly
, The big disadvantage of the
computer
 that does not have to solve
that is
 its data that can be stolen or
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infiltrated.
Secondly
, The light of the
computer
 can be harmful to the eyes and affect to vision Osteoarthritis often comes from sitting too long at the
computer
. In my opinion,
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computer
 is still a good tool if we know how to use it and apply it when needed, if it is not used effectively, it will harm us.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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