A lot of money is spent on repairing old buildings. Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be spent on knocking down old building and building new ones. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary ,era there is a heated argument over the issue that more bills
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spent on the renovation of ancient furnishings.A majority of society favours repairing old ownership capital should be spent on distorted ancient structures and buildings.Others ,go the opposite to it.I fully accord with the statement.I will discuss the logical conclusion in the upcoming paragraph. There is adequate evidence of view which are substantial.The first and foremost one is repairing an old
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is not a safe location.There are a lot of chances to get damaged again it is not safe from natural disasters
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as earthquakes, floods etc.Adding more to it nowadays individuals are very stingy to spend bills on houses or equipment of new making
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they like renovating the old
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.,some people think that spending wages on new ownership
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madness.,
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even the renovation of
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will easily spoil earlier and
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be a waste of time and payment. Probing ahead in
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modern era most of the places were constructed as new building
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that nowadays architecture and engineering are well-trained and educated they make new
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in modern style and are fully safe from all-natural calamities.
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making a new building
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takes less consumption of land
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consumes less time and salary.Whilst governments
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to take strict action on the old
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and they have to make new
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with modern design at an affordable price. To recapitulate,
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style of ownership is stronger and much better
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of the old equipment.Admittedly individuals live a good life and feel more protected in new
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