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Nowadays, the football supporters behave violently. What is the cause? How can we solve it?

#football #supporters
Today many people argue that
supporters
 of football
very
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are very
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 rude when defending
his
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their
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team
.
This
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These
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supporters
behave
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behaving
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 violently is what causes it too fanatical.
Therefore
, one potential solution to the
supporters
behave
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behaving
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 violently is giving education
how
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on how
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 to
support
 the right way. The causes
of
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apply
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supporters
behave
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behaving
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 violently is too extremist because the followers feel disappointed when saw the state of
his
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their
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team
 lost in games.
That is
 to say, they do not know how to control their emotions, and they do whatever it takes to vent their emotions until they are satisfied. Afterwards, the result of their
behavior
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behaviour
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 is
loss
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the loss
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 of all involved parties.
For example
,
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in The
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The
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An
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 incident in
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an Indonesian
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Indonesian
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Indonesia
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in
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apply
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football match riots ensued
fans
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among fans
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 because the club
those
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apply
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they
support
 lose and they attack anyone resulting in casualties.
On the other hand
, one of
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the solution
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solution
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solutions
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 for reducing losses from abusive
behavior
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behaviour
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 by
supporters
 is giving education
how
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on how
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their
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there
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 be
well behaved
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well-behaved
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fans
.
That is
 to say, the government give some rules for
fans
 or
their
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apply
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teach
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teaches
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 how to properly
support
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themsupport
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. Afterwards, if
fans
 know how to
support
 correctly it will benefit the other
peoples
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people
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 because it is essential to
supporters
.
For instance
,
fans
 in Japan continue to behave well,
while
 his
team
 suffered defeat in the match
like
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apply
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they respect the players, so when they are doing it will have a positive impact or there
is
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are
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 not any big disadvantages.
To conclude
, there are
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the cause
a cause
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cause
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causes
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 of
fans
doing
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do
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 like it because they are too fanatical when supporting his
team
. A great way to tackle
supporters
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who behave
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behave
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behaving
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 violently
this
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about this
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 problem is
giving
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by giving
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 education
how
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on how
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 to
support
correctly
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them correctly
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. Where possible,
such
fans
 respect their
team
 whatever happens in games.
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