Some people say the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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there is serious debate associated with the main Remove the comma
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environment
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environmental
problem
. Some people
believe the main environmental problem
of our time in
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is
extinction
of many Add an article
the extinction
species
of animals and plants. Howevere
, others say Correct your spelling
However
the
are Correct your spelling
they
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a vast
number
of environmental Change the article
a number
the number
issue
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issues
should
be taken into consideration. And I Correct pronoun usage
that should
belive
both Correct your spelling
believe
view
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views
in
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at
this
time.
On the one hand, A group of individuals justifiably argue that earth
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the earth
face
several huge ecosystem Change the verb form
faces
problems
suche
as climate change. Correct your spelling
such
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, clamate
change can lead to more and more Correct your spelling
climate
environmant
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environment
environmental
problems
. For instance
, global warming can produce many issue
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issues
such
as malting
arctic ice and drought, it can be dangerous for Correct your spelling
melting
whole
of Correct article usage
the whole
planet
. Add an article
the planet
Thus
, Correct article usage
the extincting
extincting
of animals and plants Correct your spelling
extinction
are
related to other Correct subject-verb agreement
is
environment
issues.
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environmental
On the other hand
, some population claime
the main environmental Correct your spelling
claim
claimed
problem
in
these days are many Change preposition
apply
species
become extinct. They insist, as a result
of
, destroying wildlife habitats and human activities Change preposition
apply
such
as cuting
trees and growing farming, increasing agriculture. Correct your spelling
cutting
Also
, human life
depends to
other Change preposition
on
species
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species'
life
so people
should be aware about
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of
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the consequents
consequents
of animal or Replace the word
consequences
plants
extinction.
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plant
To conclude
, I believe any type of environmental problem
is important and people
and governments should considere
about Correct your spelling
consider
consequents
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consequences
on
our Change preposition
of
life
. Because human life
depend
on Change the verb form
depends
earth
conditions and Change noun form
earth's
also
problem
such
as climate change can lead to produce
a vast number of Change the verb form
producing
issue
for humans and other Add an article
an issue
the issue
species
. In my opinion, people
should raise their awareness and sereach
the causes to help resolve Correct your spelling
reach
problems
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